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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 07:55, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Comments[edit]

  • Why its named "Manjappada Kerala Blasters Fans" instead of just Manjappada? I couldn't even find this in fanclub's website.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 06:42, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citations aren't properly formatted. Like author's name, source date missing.  Done Iamfarzan (talk) 14:27, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Awards and recognition" - this part is unsourced.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Swap the positions of "controversy" and "Awards" section.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 06:42, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...claimed them as Manjappada members" - the citation doesnt say this. It says, "member of manjappada"  Done Shahoodu (talk) 06:42, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Chants and tifos" - the section says noting about chants.  DoneShahoodu (talk) 07:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Integrate "Women's group" in history. its just a single sentence para. (MOS:PARA)  Done Shahoodu (talk) 06:42, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add English translations for non-English citations.  Done Iamfarzan (talk) 14:27, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citation [40] is a dead link.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 07:31, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Manjappada have an ... games to fans." - unencyclopaedic.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 07:34, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Awards and recognition" add prose to this section.  Done Poppified (talk) 03:49, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • An image is notimated for deletion. Done Shahoodu (talk) 07:34, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Avoid caps in citations like in citation [23]. (WP:ALLCAPS)  Done Iamfarzan (talk) 14:33, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Break the lead into 2 parts and expand them a bit.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 14:44, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Needs a lit bit more expansion. Add the establishment time, travelling fans, yellow colour. This would be my final point of the review.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  12:24, 4 January 2021 (UTC)  Done Poppified (talk) 13:40, 4 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citation doesn't say manjappda won 2020 fan club award.  DoneShahoodu (talk) 16:45, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • How boycotting matches is a controversy?  Done Shahoodu (talk) 16:43, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead should compile all the info present in the body. But things like Indian Sports Honours, 14 districts etc. aren't present in the body. DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • It says "12 other Indian states" but, not mentioned in the body.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:27, 19 December 2020 (UTC) Comment: I missed to add 12. Now its  Done Shahoodu (talk) 09:02, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Avoid citations in lead. (WP:CITELEAD) DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • For the chant, use {{Quote box}} instead of the existing {{Quote}}  Done Shahoodu (talk) 18:13, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mention with citation that manjappada means yellow army, in the body. DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Not everyone who... - this starts with quotation, but doesn't end.  DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't think its required to mention "The 12th Man" in the lead. Its a normal thing for all the clubs. Nothing distinct. Even there's a article on this 12th man (football).  DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:12, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • If there's not specific author of any source, nothing required to mention. Like its mentioned 'no-author' incitation [48]. its not required  DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:12, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • This still exists. Like in citation [30] Goal is written in author's name.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)  Done Iamfarzan (talk) 06:51, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The citation [39] doesn't prove this "The group wear as..."  Done
  • Use – between years. (2020–21, instead of 2020-21)  DoneShahoodu (talk) 17:12, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citation [90] is a blog. Need a another source (WP:BLOG). Comment: Couldnt fins better source. So removed it from lede and body  Done Shahoodu (talk) 18:07, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • It mentions "ISL" multiple times. A first time reader will have no idea what ISL is. Add "Indian Super League (ISL)" wherever its mentioned first.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 06:39, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citation [13] doesnt say, Manjapadda is spread accross 44 countries.
    • Comment: Added proper citation  Done Shahoodu (talk) 08:50, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " ..49,000 during the inaugural season" - link the inaugural season with the season article.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...150 flags are used for each game." - citation doesn't say 150 flags. Try to solve the data issues like these.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The active social ... to fans." - Even smaller fanclubs provide regular updates in social media. so, I dont think, its required to mention.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add "rivalry", "other activities" in the lead as the lead summarises everything in the body.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 17:05, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the infobox, |Abbreviation=Manjappada. How?? Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink 'keralite' in the body  Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • citation [71] is a dead link  Done Poppified (talk) 16:25, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • citation [40] is in malayalam. but the title mentioned in ref is in english only. DonePoppified (talk) 16:30, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • in citation [87], instead of "Manjappada | Heart Beat of Kerala Blasters.", mention only "manjappada"  Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "I can only wish it wont happen again" - won't  Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The event was a initiative aimed at honouring sports" - "an initiative"  Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Manjappada members occupies it during" -- "occupy"  Done Poppified (talk) 16:45, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the West Block Blues, the largest supporters' group of Bengaluru FC" - citation doesnt say its the largest Done Poppified (talk) 10:01, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any dimensions available for the tifo? if yes, add it.  Done Poppified (talk)
  • In the section "Chants and tifos", it starts with "Apart from their official anthem, Manjappada..." - I would suggest adding some details for the anthem. search some Malayalam sources. Done Poppified (talk) 08:14, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • wikilink the first "Kerala" in the body  Done Poppified (talk) 03:47, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • add an external links section and put the website there.  Done Poppified (talk) 03:47, 2 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • As of when manjapadda is spread over 12 states, 14 districts, 44 countries? and avoid using "currently" (WP:Currently)  Done Poppified (talk) 15:25, 4 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see any other issues.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  16:07, 4 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Wilhelm Tell DCCXLVI[edit]

  • The first sentence in the lead - 'Manjappada are the organised supporters' group of KBFC"... are they the only organised fan group? I suggest changing the to an, or, if you have a source for it, the largest. Wilhelm Tell DCCXLVI converse | fings wot i hav dun 07:42, 19 December 2020 (UTC) Changed the into an  Done Shahoodu (talk) 08:56, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • At the logo page provide rationales for WP:NFCC#1 and WP:NFCC#2, i.e. for why it is not replaceable by free-use media and why you think it won't hurt the owners commercially, ASAP. (Second point is not too important, but do try to justify NFCC#1). If you cannot then explain why. Wilhelm Tell DCCXLVI converse | fings wot i hav dun 07:57, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 DonePoppified (talk) 11:02, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Lee Vilenski (in WP:Discord)[edit]

  • During the 2018–19 season, the Blasters were winless in 14 games and fans became dissatisfied with the management's indifference towards them. Although Manjappada boycotted a December 2018 game against Jamshedpur FC,[19] "We don’t intend to boycott our club’s matches, since our motto is 'Nammalk Nammalund' ('We have us')" stated the group. - not really sure what this means  DoneShahoodu (talk) 14:20, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "Manjappada stand" originated in 2014, during the Blasters' first season.[ - what is this? :Clarified  DoneShahoodu (talk) 14:20, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Id argue that culture section needs a rewrite - most of it is obvious, or pointless.  Done Shahoodu (talk) 14:20, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • There's a few refs that have weird |work parameters, such as Sportskeeda APP is the No 1 Personalised Sports APP available today. Just select your fav teams & players and you are done.  Done. Iamfarzan (talk) 13:54, 25 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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