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October 4, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 26, 2012.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that "If We Are the Body", Christian rock band Casting Crowns' debut single, utilizes the violin, mandolin, and accordion in its arrangement?

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Copyvio[edit]

Why do people keep on making pages with just a blip about the song and then the lyrics? --Superpika66 (talk) 02:57, 24 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:If We Are the Body/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 0z (talk · contribs) 10:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

General[edit]

Theres one dead link
- YReplaced the link. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

Is there a single cover?
- Not that I could find, no. It is a bit unusual, but I don't think there was one.
July 23, 2003 > July 26, 2003
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Mention the studios and locations in Recorded
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Mention the song's release date and record label
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background and recording[edit]

The album was > The song was
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Composition[edit]

Remove According to the sheet music published by Musicnotes.com, → Not needed
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
You say "the song" a lot here. Replace some of them with "If We Are the Body" or "it"
- YCut down total from 20 to 11. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link [[Refrain|chorus]]
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception and accolades[edit]

Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Remove Mark Hall link. You've already linked the name in Background and recording.
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance[edit]

Remove self-titled debut album link
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances[edit]

Link set list
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Casting performed > Casting Crowns performed
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
setlist > set list
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel[edit]

No issues

Charts[edit]

No issues

Release and radio history[edit]

No issues

References[edit]

FN2 – missing publisher
- YFixed. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN4 – remove CCM Magazine and Salem Publishing links
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN5 – fix dash
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN6 – theres two dot points after Apple Inc
- YFixed. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN9 – theres two dot points after the S in the author's name
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN10 – remove the Christianity Today link
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN11 – fix dash
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN12 – use the "Cite news" template because the source is a newspaper article
- YCitation was replaced so point is not relevant anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN13 – fix dash
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN14 – Fix dash. Also, remove Radio & Records and VNU Media links.
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN15 – remove the Christianity Today link
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN16 – Remove Billboard link. Also, publisher is missing.
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN17 to FN22 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN23 – Remove Billboard and VNU Media links. Also, the original url is missing.
- YDone, but the original url does not exist anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN25 & FN26 – remove Jesus Freak Hideout links
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN27 – use the "Cite news" template
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN29 – use the "Cite news" template
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN30 – fix dash
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
FN31 to FN34 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
- YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Summary[edit]

Great work! Article is well written. On hold for 7 days. — Oz (talk) 11:53, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the issues. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Passed. — Oz (talk) 20:51, 4 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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