Talk:Fall Down (will.i.am song)

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Countless people on youtube and pop music websites are comparing the song to Die Young and Crazy Kids from Ke$ha's latest album, Warrior. Should be inserted on here when the Critical Response section appears.

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 19:19, 6 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

General overview[edit]

Disambiguation links (per Dablinks)[edit]

Dablinks denotes one disambiguation link that needs correction.

Done

External links (per Checklinks)[edit]

Checklinks does not denote any external link that needs correction.

Spot-checking to search for WP:OR[edit]

One problem with "It was released to Australian radio stations in July 2013 as the third single from the record" inline citation: it does not specifically appear that it was released in July. It kind of hints at that but it doesn't really specify. Reword.

Done

Rest is alright.

References[edit]

R16 → Contact Music should be replaced by Contactmusic.com.

Done

R7/R8/R12 → Buzz Media should be replaced by Spin Media

Done

Prose, redundancies and visual aspect[edit]

Lead section[edit]

"and was certified gold in both countries" → ", being certified gold in both countries."

Done

Critical reception[edit]

"felt like one of #willpower's "interminable 15 tracks were written in the studio moments before they were recorded." → "felt like one of #willpower's "interminable 15 tracks [that] were written in the studio [...]"

Done

"delivered on "Ashtrays and Heartbreaks" Snoop Lion" → "delivered on Cyrus' collaboration with [nationality adjective] rapper Snoop Lion, "Ashtrays & Heartbreaks" (2013).

Done

"Contact Music" is actually Contactmusic.com.

Done

"which Brent Faulkner agreed was "utterly ridiculous"." → although he agrees with the lyrics comment, the "utterly ridiculous" comment was directed to the song itself and not to the actual lyrics. Could you make a separate sentence? Also, add 'from PopMatters' next to Faulkner.

Done

Charts / Certifications[edit]

Merge the two sections, adding a {{col-2}} template.

Done

Comments[edit]

As usual, a good read and just a few comments to address. I will not have any problem passing this, I guess. 19:19, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for your review, I appreciate it! WikiRedactor (talk) 22:24, 6 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Second read-through and result[edit]

I'm happy with the changes made, so, congratulations! prism △ 14:15, 7 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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This was only released as a promotional single.[edit]

Yes, only as a promo. Can anyone provide a source that says that this WAS A SINGLE anywhere in the world? because the source that it was in Australia don't exist anymore. If anyone can't prove this, this must be changed as a PROMO SINGLE. It was NEVER released to radio in the USA, and it doesn't have music video. The itunes us store even deleted the single version. Orginally this was going to be a single and a video was recorded for it but they scrapped the project and this was never released. --83.52.0.106 (talk) 00:52, 23 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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