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04:09:03, 25 June 2018 review of submission by Joanneleung36

• Joanneleung36 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Transgender Resource Center (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

we have uploaded more media reference about transgender resource center, please check if this help. Also since the media reports about Transgender Resource Center are usually written in Chinese while English reports are usually concentrated to 1 to 2 media only. Therefore, we want to ask if it is ok to add some Chinese media report so as to have a better sourcing.

Joanneleung36 (talk) 04:09, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Joanneleung36 Sources from any languages are permissible in Wikipedia. If you would find "reliable" sources from major newspapers (be it in Chinese or other languages) that talk "directly" about the subject that would be helpful. CASSIOPEIA^(talk) 04:20, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

12:54:47, 25 June 2018 review of submission by Fernanda Liendo

• Fernanda Liendo (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:PHP Tools for Visual Studio (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, I'm sending this paragraph for review since I'm not sure if the information I've written and the references comply with Wikipedia's rules. Fernanda Liendo (talk) 12:54, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

No need to post a copy of the draft, the link Draft:PHP Tools for Visual Studio is sufficient

PHP Tools for Visual Studio Developer(s) DEVSENSE s.r.o. Initial release March 2012 (2012-03) Stable release 1.28.10846 / May 18, 2018 (2018-05-18) Written in C# Operating system Microsoft Windows Available in English, Spanish, German, Japanese, others. Type PHP IDE License Proprietary PHP Tools for Visual Studio is a commercial extension targeting Microsoft Visual Studio, which adds the ability to work with PHP programming language. PHP Tools integration allows software developers to create and manage projects (computer programs, web sites, web services and web apps), debug and maintain the source code. PHP Tools provides a code editor for PHP that supports IntelliSense (the code completion component), code refactoring and code validation. It has an integrated debugger that works for local and remote debugging. Additionally, it includes built-in tools, such as integrated support for Composer packages, testing through PHPUnit, support for PHP template engines such as Smarty, on-the-fly code validation, automatic installation and configuration of PHP or deployment through SFTP, FTP, FTPS, File System or Web Deploy which is used mainly to deploy to Azure. Most of the features in Visual Studio are extended with PHP Tools, such as HTML, CSS, JavaScript or TypeScript support. All the editions are supported including Community Editions. However, it does not support Express Editions See also Phalanger (compiler) References References Category:Integrated development environments Category:PHP

Hi Fernanda Liendo. The cited sources are not reliable:

• Coding Freaks is a self-published blog.
• Visual Studio Magazine might be reliable, but reads like a press release, bringing its independence into question.
• The portion of MSDN that is being referenced is the reader comments section, which has no reputation for accuracy or fact checking.
• PHPClasses and Stack Overflow are user-generated content, not subject to editorial oversight or academic peer review.

Wikipedia is not for marketing, promotion, or public relations. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:07, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

15:17:45, 25 June 2018 review of submission by Grapkin

• Grapkin (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Kim Dana Kupperman (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I did not understand some of the feedback I received from the editor:

- Subject may not be notable enough and better references needed. I included reviews from The New York Times of her books.  Wondering how to improve with other references?

- Too many external links. Do I need to move links to a section below rather than include in body of the text? Will this help/be enough?

- Need to use more formal tone and eliminate laudatory phrases. If I take out words like "award-winning" etc., will that be enough?

Thanks for any and all feedback you can provide. GraceGrapkin (talk) 15:17, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Grapkin (talk) 15:17, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Don't put links in the body of the article. Relevent links can be in an External Links section. If you are linking to something with a wikipedia page you should wikilink with topic without the spaces. Definantely trim laudatory phrases. This is not an ad. Legacypac (talk) 05:16, 26 June 2018 (UTC)