Wikipedia:Peer review/Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope/archive1

Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope[edit]

Been working on this since The Phantom Menace got promoted to FA as I finished the prequel trilogy and decided to work on the original trilogy. It's been written and formatted to follow suit with the other FAs in the series, but I'm looking for feedback as it is currently a GA nominee and would like it to be an FA candidate soon enough. :) The Filmaker 23:23, 2 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps the article could use a few more references. For instance, in the production section, although Empire of Dreams is a good source for a lot of the information, I think a variety of sources should be cited for the information. The Wookieepedian 23:34, 2 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Forgive me for being so blunt, but Why? Empire of Dreams is a perfectly suitable source that is very reliable and possibly more reliable than any other source one would be able to dig up. A variety of sources for the production section would only be aestetically pleasing however we're getting the same amount of information in the end. And nothing has changed except the little number at the bottom of the references section. The Filmaker 23:50, 2 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The production and synopsis sections are quite intimidating to look at, and could be broken up with subheadings to keep it looking more like an encylopedia article than a textbook. Seegoon 17:45, 4 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The production section maybe. Not the synopsis section as it is shorter than the synopsis section for the Revenge of the Sith article, and is not intimidating at all. The Filmaker 22:14, 4 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]