Wikipedia:Peer review/Old Mobile Site/archive1

Old Mobile Site[edit]

I have recently conducted a major expansion of the article on the Old Mobile Site. I believe the article is well-researched and has a good layout. I would like to receive comments with the hope of developing the article to Good Article status. Thanks for the input. Leeannedy 22:59, 19 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The "History" section seems very low on inline citations; I think that'll present a problem if you're going for GA status with it. Also, on a more trivial note, the lead seems to feature the word "settlement" an awful lot. You might want to consider some synonyms. Angmering 15:35, 20 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the input. I am working to improve the citations in the "History" section. I have used several references throughout the section that should be properly referenced. I have also noticed in several places redundant phrasing (site, location, settlement, etc.). I will try to improve the word selection. Thanks for the valuable input. Leeannedy 15:56, 20 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]