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List of victories of Rudolf Berthold[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because…I have found little on quality standards centered specifically on WP lists. I am looking for suggestions for improvement, as well as any policies or consensuses I have overlooked. I am relisting this due to non-response to last posting.

Thanks, Georgejdorner (talk) 19:33, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kavyansh.Singh[edit]

Hi,

Second point in Featured list criteria is Lead: "It has an engaging lead that introduces the subject and defines the scope and inclusion criteria".The article has lead only of 3-4 sentences, which needs to be increased in order to summarize most of the aerial victories mentioned.
If it is possible to separate date and time from the list as two different columns, it would look much better. Also, using any of the date templates in preferable.

Good Luck! Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:46, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]