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History of Mumbai[edit]

Hi all - I want to make this article an FA, and I request your help and advice. This Fire Burns Always 05:16, 25 July 2006 (UTC) I only made a light reading. The article appears to be rich in information. Following are my comments.[reply]

  1. Paint all the links blue.
  2. I understand that the subject of the article makes the sections organised along phases. But still, I feel that the section titles are lacking the attribute of mutual-exclusiveness. I know I'm being vague, but I'm short of words here. Perhaps I mean the need for increased specifity of titles or a different organisation. Never mind until I'm able to come up with something actionable.
  3. Could this be supplemented with a timeline either part of the article or outside ?
  4. Consider finding a better reference than http://www.touroperatorsinindia.com/Bombay/Bombay.htm I see that it's very informative, but people may doubt its credibilty.
  5. It needs a copyedit, of course.

More later. -- Sundar \talk \contribs 08:34, 26 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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