Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Japan Airlines/1

Japan Airlines[edit]

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Result: Fails GA criterion 2, as significant unsourced material is present; also violates criterion 4, with some overly-promotional writing. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:01, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The article is not meeting the GA criteria in a few ways:

5 cn tags, but some uncited passages not tagged
Self-contradictory statement in lead (which airline is biggest)
Not sticking to summary style. Contains many phrases like "On 7 February, several news outlets reported that", which rarely belong in encyclopedic articles.
External links in the body of the article. Femke (alt) (talk) 09:10, 6 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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