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The list was promoted by Hahc21 10:02, 15 September 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Timeline of the Jurchen campaigns against the Song Dynasty[edit]

Timeline of the Jurchen campaigns against the Song Dynasty (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Typing General (talk) 07:12, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets the Featured List criteria. Typing General (talk) 07:12, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Underneath-it-All
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  • Place all refs in numeric order: [18][1] → [1][18]
  • The "Reference(s)" area in each table → Refs.
  • Citations → Notes
  • Bibliography → References

– Underneath-it-All (talk) 18:18, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All fixed, with the exception of Citations → Notes. There's already a heading for Notes.--Typing General (talk) 18:35, 4 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 15:47, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Khitan is a dab link.
  • "The Song Dynasty prior to and after the Jurchen conquests." no full stop required. And I can't quite work out what the map means, it needs further explanation.
  • "a Tungusic speaking" -> "a Tungusic-speaking"
  • Link Manchuria.
  • "fought between the Jurchen Jin Dynasty and the Song Dynasty." - year range?
  • "marched southwards with" not sure you need the s on the end of southwards.
  • Don't like the style of tables at all. And they doesn't comply with MOS:DTT with regard to row and col scopes.
  • Page ranges need to be separated by an en-dash.

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:34, 9 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I have fixed all.--Typing General (talk) 07:29, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - looks good! I'm not sure that the tables need to be sortable if the only thing you can do is flip the date column back and forth- and if they are, I think the links need to be replicated. I.e, Yue Fei is linked in his 1133 instance, but if you flip the table that's no longer the first one in the table, so you'd need to link the rest. I really don't think the flipping is necessary though. Also, Shaoxing Treaty is a redirect- thought I'd mention it since it's the only one you have. --PresN 23:11, 3 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - very nice list! As PresN hints above, if a table is sortable, then each item needs to be linked on each occurrence. However, I would agree with PresN that having a table that can only be sorted by year (when it's already arranged by year) is a little pointless. Dana boomer (talk) 19:37, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Quick comment – The Holcombe citation in the reference list has some ugly red text in it. I think it will go away if you remove the hidden access date, but haven't tested out my theory. Giants2008 (Talk) 23:03, 6 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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