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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 17:11, 4 September 2012 [1].

Mystikal discography[edit]

Mystikal discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 12:42, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I have worked extensively on it to ensure that it meets the criteria for a featured list, which I have based on the previous discographies I've worked on. Any criticism would be welcome if it improves the page. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 12:42, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Calvin999 (talk) 11:13, 17 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Calvin999
  • I've gone through the article and the tables are really well formatted, look very clear and concise. References looks good also. There are no dablink problems but there are two dead links. Pending this issue is resolved I will support the proposal of this list. Aaron • You Da One 16:34, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I've fixed the charts.de link, but the Vevo link (see it yourself here) seems to actually be live even though Toolserver is labelling it as dead. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 17:32, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 13:23, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Lead and infobox disagree with each other.
  • Third sentence (starting with "Following his...") has too many run-on clauses...
  • "in the top 5 of " top five.
  • "After Mystikal began serving a prison " maybe "While Mystikal served a prison..."?
  • "so far " need a timeframe for that.
  • Where are the release dates referenced and which country/countries are they relevant to?
  • Use a better link for the Kiss of the Dragon link, e.g. Kiss of the Dragon#Soundtrack.
  • Allmusic->AllMusic.

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:12, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All (hopefully) done. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 12:54, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where are the release dates referenced and which country/countries are they relevant to? The Rambling Man (talk) 16:06, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Do you mean for the dates in the tables, or in the lead? I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 16:20, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Tables. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:32, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 17:04, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Is that always the US release date? If so, note it, if not, not which release where... The Rambling Man (talk) 17:07, 22 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
AllMusic does use the American release dates: indicated this in the tables (apologies if this is becoming exasperating). I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 06:40, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Holiday56 (talk) 13:30, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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  • "Mystikal's following two studio albums, Unpredictable and Ghetto Fabulous, were both released on the record label No Limit Records (Jive distributed the album rather than No Limit's parent label, Priority Records) and both peaked in the top five of the Billboard 200 and were later certified platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA)."
A run-on is present in this sentence. Perhaps a change to:
"Mystikal's following two studio albums, Unpredictable and Ghetto Fabulous, were both released on the record label No Limit Records; Jive distributed the album rather than No Limit's parent label, Priority Records. Both peaked in the top five of the Billboard 200 and were later certified platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA)."
  • "It peaked at 37" → "It peaked at number 37"
  • Since Mystikal is still a studio album, perhaps make the independent albums section a subsection of the studio albums section.
    • Table caption for the "Independent albums" section could be made more specific: "List of independent albums, with some notes" → "List of independent studio albums, with some notes".
Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 13:30, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any reason why "Original" has a source in the singles section? It has charted, after all.
  • No need to capitalize "The" in "The Netherlands".
  • No need to italicize "[Original Soundtrack]" in the AllMusic reference for "The Edge of the Blade".
  • Piped link for "Bubbling Under R&B/Hip-Hop Singles" should point to "Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs#Bubbling Under R&B/Hip-Hop Singles".

Holiday56 (talk) 12:23, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All Done. I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 12:40, 30 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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