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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 19:09, 4 August 2012 [1].

List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Brett Lee[edit]

List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Brett Lee (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): —Vensatry (Ping me) 09:26, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it meets the criteria. Prior to this nomination it underwent a peer review and improvements have been implemented. It is based upon existing FL, List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Anil Kumble —Vensatry (Ping me) 09:26, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 14:53, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • Link cricket the first time round.
  • "during his career" repetitive (you said pretty much the same thing in the previous sentence).
  • Lead image caption needs a full stop.
  • Dinesh is Denesh.
  • cricinfo is linked in ref 6, but is mentioned both before and after unlinked.

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:29, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 17:39, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "... one of the fastest international bowlers in modern cricketing era." the should come after in
  • I don't see any reason why you should use less than 100% font size, both the tables should be full size
  • I adopted a style which is similar to Kumble's list. Anyhow, now I've increased the table width. —Vensatry (Ping me) 17:20, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Exclamation marks should be used instead of pipes before scope=row

NapHit (talk) 17:39, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Since I could not find a single important column, "row scopes" are not used. —Vensatry (Ping me) 05:55, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment you may wish to update the lead as a result of this. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:51, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

  • "and his first five-wicket haul came in the second Test of the series; a match which Australia won." Semi-colon should probably be a regular old comma instead.
  • The "as of 2012" in the third paragraph was fine when the FLC started, but now that he has apparently retired there is no longer a need to have it. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ZiaKhan 05:06, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • You may link "Brisbane" in the second para.
  • I think there is no need of [N 2] at the end of 3rd para and in the 2nd last sentence of the last para.
  • Since he has announced his retirement from international cricket you should use past tense in the last para, specifically in the 2nd last sentence.

ZiaKhan 18:05, 19 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Support – Meets the standards. ZiaKhan 05:06, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support – peer reviewed the article, happy it meets the FL standards. Harrias talk 11:06, 4 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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