User talk:Undeemiss/Transphobia

Hi, im suppose to be giving you feedback but I'm not sure what content is yours can you bold it or tell me what sections you did? --Julia Honda

Apologies, I've underlined, bolded, and italicized all of the content that I added to the page. Undeemiss (talk) 20:18, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I really like the use of statistics and sources. I see how it could be a tough page to edit because it seems pretty full of information. You can always re-edit the information on there if some sections aren't accurate or if it's unnecessary or outdated. I didn't read the entire page so I don't know if that's the case. I think the statistics you have used are great additions and if you're having trouble finding sources you can always talk to our librarian she helped me a ton with finding keywords and sources. Last year I had a tricky page because it was dominant and submissive relationships so their aren't a ton of information on academic sources out there so I also looked at blogs and other sources that arent academic to get help on what else I could research on the topic that could be added to the page. It also helps to link similar pages on Wikipedia if they're mentioned. -Julia HondaJuliahonda (talk) 20:31, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate the feedback! Undeemiss (talk) 17:30, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]