User talk:Mustang Ed

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First Ali vs. Norton fight[edit]

The article states:

"Following 10 victorious fights, in 1973 Ali fought Ken Norton breaking his jaw and losing a 12 round decision."

This sentence could confuse readers into thinking that Ali broke Norton's jaw. Ali did not break Norton's jaw. Ali did not break his own jaw. Norton broke Ali's jaw.

Here is my suggestion for improvement.

"In 1973, following 10 victorious fights, Ali lost a 12 round decision to Ken Norton. In this fight, Norton broke Ali's jaw."

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