User talk:MRR1993/Environmental issues with coral reefs
Communities (Peyton): Good information added. You did not add an image or wikilinks, please do this. Also, your sentence about the DWH spill does not say anything about coral reef communities, so please add something different. Your sentence saying "higher order thinking" is too close to the original wording, please paraphrase. Your Suhm reference has nothing to do with oil on coral reefs. Please choose a different reference.
Structure (Macy): Good information added, but your information is describing communities more than it is structure. Please add wikilinks. Nice image and references, but check formatting.
Cause/Effect (Nykobe): Good information added and image. Please add wikilinks. Your references are not peer-reviewed. You need to only use peer reviewed references. Also check your formatting.
Clean up (Heath): Good information added. Please add wikilinks. Nice image and references, but check formatting.
Whiteamphipod (talk) 18:11, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
Dr. White's critique of your first draft[edit]
Communities (Peyton): Good information added. You did not add an image or wikilinks, please do this. Also, your sentence about the DWH spill does not say anything about coral reef communities, so please add something different. Your sentence saying "higher order thinking" is too close to the original wording, please paraphrase. Your Suhm reference has nothing to do with oil on coral reefs. Please choose a different reference.
Structure (Macy): Good information added, but your information is describing communities more than it is structure. Please add wikilinks. Nice image and references, but check formatting.
Cause/Effect (Nykobe): Good information added and image. Please add wikilinks. Your references are not peer-reviewed. You need to only use peer reviewed references. Also check your formatting.
Clean up (Heath): Good information added. Please add wikilinks. Nice image and references, but check formatting.
Whiteamphipod (talk) 18:21, 12 April 2022 (UTC)