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Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (December 5)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RileyBugz was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Also, you need to cite reliable sources (like news articles) that are independent from the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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RileyBugz^会話_投稿記録 20:10, 5 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Lloan, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! RileyBugz^会話_投稿記録 20:10, 5 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Forbes blogs[edit]

Please do not continue to add citations to https://www.forbes.com/sites/garrettgunderson/2017/11/15/this-fitness-ceo-is-revolutionizing-the-franchise-industry-just-by-caring-more/2/#50f5a0d36ecd, as you did at Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp. In the "sites" section and written by a contributor instead of by Forbes magazine staff, it is a effectively a self-published blog with no meaningful editorial oversight. As such, it is not a reliable sources for facts. See the archives of previous discussions at WP:RSN. Thank you. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:24, 12 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Worldbruce: Thanks for letting me know. Apart from that, is there anything else I should do to the article so that it can be approved?

@Worldbruce: When you get a chance, could you let me know if there is anything else I should do to my article to get it approved? Thanks!

Your submission at Articles for creation: FBBC Wiki (January 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Worldbruce was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Fit Body Boot Camp, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Worldbruce (talk) 17:15, 8 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (January 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SeraphWiki was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and save.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
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SeraphWiki (talk) 10:18, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (January 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It continues to read exactly like the advertisement for a non-notable organisation that it is.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and save.
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KJP1 (talk) 19:55, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp[edit]

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. SeraphWiki (talk) 21:16, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]