User talk:John R Vera/The Banquet of the Officers of the St George Militia Company in 1627

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I would recommend reworking the lead, possibly once you the other sections are completed. I think the mention of schutterstuck could be reworked to be more clear.

I would recommend also adding another section to go further into the symbolism of the colors they are wearing. Also to add citations to what is mentioned in the existing subject matter paragraph.

The "History" and "Historical Matter" headings could be combined when added to. Supersonicswan (talk) 21:24, 5 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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