User talk:Jerrylin1208/sandbox

Thank your for your feedback! I made a couple of changes according to your suggestions.Oliverk25 (talk) 16:21, 28 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jerry, I would create subheadings for each year and maybe expand on them a little more with history and key initiatives of the company.Oliverk25 (talk) 16:21, 28 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]