User talk:Elmogeo/sandbox

Tone[edit]

The tone is good and the picture a nice touch.Bryantlib (talk) 00:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Before making the paragraph 'live'[edit]

Remember to work with group members when uploading to the live page to ensure you dont upload same information. Also consider how you will insert your information into the existing cider page. You may have to break up your sentences or not include everything depending on the information that is already on the page.

Proofread your paragraph before you make your information 'live'.

Before you post make sure one person in your group created a new section on the Cider apple talk page you are uploading to, letting the people watching the page know you are making edits. And also make sure you summarize your final change, when submitting to the live page. If you don't remember how to do these steps, re-watch the tutorial. :) Bryantlib (talk) 14:24, 7 May 2018 (UTC)Ciderprof1 (talk) 14:48, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This is a good start, but I suggest adding in some information that is specific to cider apple orchards. In Particular, I'd like you to make some comparisons between modern high-density systems and traditional and "Buch" orchards that are used in the UK.

I suggest looking at the books on reserve at Mann.

Also see:

http://www.archiveofciderpomology.co.uk/archivereports/sustainableciderappleproduction7.2.4.pdf

https://pubs.ext.vt.edu/AREC/AREC-46/AREC-46.html

http://extension.wsu.edu/publications/pubs/fs141e/

"Cider Apple Growers Guide" by Liz Copas: https://newcatalog.library.cornell.edu/catalog/4396830 Ciderprof1 (talk) 15:34, 7 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]