User talk:Debra2710/sandbox

Some suggestion for your content - grammar mistake/citation improvement

Hello, I am a WikiInfant. I occasionally review you page and want to list some possible better English expression for your article. But I don't want to directly change your sandbox content, so I list some possible suggestions as below:

1) Tense problem

Original Line 1: He was born in a wealthy family and his parents want him to inherit the family business but he refused because he loves performing and acting.

Problem: You used both past tense and perfect tense in one sentence. Because of tense consistency and considering those events all happened in the past, you may want to change "want" and "loves" into past tense.

Original Line 2: Because of his good-looking appearance and his acting skills, he becomes very popular in China.

Problem: This event happened in the past, so you also should correct "becomes" with "became".

2)Citation suggestion

As I am also new to this community, I just want to provide some suggestions for you and hope that helps. One detail may require citation is "the number '1314' means 'eternity love' in Chinese". Because it is not a common sense, so you may considering adding proof for this statement. Susususushi (talk) 17:41, 14 February 2023 (UTC)