User talk:Bai0926/User:Bai0926 fashion in China

Review suggestions for "Fashion in China"

Hello, I am your classmate in the same class collective wisdom. .The fashion in China you edit is a good article. I think your article is very well organized. Maybe I can give you some tips to make your essay perfect. the "Since the founding of New China(1949 to present)" section could be more detailed (perhaps you haven't finished editing this section yet). For example, the fashion changes in China before and after 2000 can be introduced separately. In addition, the quotation in the section "Xia, Shang and Zhou Dynasties" seems to have made mistakes, and it is suggested to revise it. I hope you can edit better, and welcome your comments on my editing, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 05:42, 9 May 2024 (UTC)