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Declined by Qcne 4 months ago. Last edited by AManWithNoPlan 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: I'm not sure why you created this draft as it's just an amalgamation of various existing articles? Qcne (talk) 16:39, 29 December 2023 (UTC)

Computers and more![edit]

Computers[edit]

Computers are modern day technology that are used for calculating, searching, looking at images,^[1]Anything you desire! And no computer is complete without what? that's right! the internet! The internet is a place where you can search images, read articles, publish, anything you decide what you want to happen on the internet!^[2]

Motherboard[edit]

and another thing you need to complete a computer is a Pc! A pc is a microcomputer that runs in a big system board is called a motherboard. ^[3] And in the motherboard there is something inside it that runs everything and is the computers name is called a CPU.

CPU (control processing unit[edit]

CPU(control processing unit) a CPU runs the computer, It sends messages, interprets, processes and executes instructions. and you CPU temp should be between 40–65°C (or 104–149°F) if not your computer is rather cooling down or heating up which you do not want you want your CPU to be at between those.^[4]

Hard Drive[edit]

Hard drive is the storage of the computer. And it runs the applications on your computer or pc and the highest the storage can go for is 22 TB ( terabytes) and There are types of Storage that have different types !

^ "Computer", Wikipedia, 2023-12-23, retrieved 2023-12-29
^ "Internet", Wikipedia, 2023-12-26, retrieved 2023-12-29
^ "Motherboard", Wikipedia, 2023-12-29, retrieved 2023-12-29
^ "what does the cpu do - Google Search". www.google.com. Retrieved 2023-12-29.

[1] "Computer", Wikipedia, 2023-12-23, retrieved 2023-12-29

[2] "Internet", Wikipedia, 2023-12-26, retrieved 2023-12-29

[3] "Motherboard", Wikipedia, 2023-12-29, retrieved 2023-12-29

[4] "what does the cpu do - Google Search". www.google.com. Retrieved 2023-12-29.

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