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Article review[edit]
The article that I am interested in is New York University. In this article, most of the information are related to the topic, but I found out that some information should be updated. In the school and colleges section, there is only the information ralted to NYU NY campus, excluding NYU Shanghai and NYU Adu Dhabi. Because NYU Shanghai and Adu Dhabi are another two main campuses of NYU, so this article should add more information about this two campuses. Besides, the admission data is out of date, which is about 2016 admission data. It should be updated by 2017 admission data.
I checked several citations, from 1995 to 2018, all of them are still working.
This article is all about New York University, and all information is from other resources and author used official data and stories to introduce NYU history and development. So this article is neutral.