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Although newbies may be delicious served with some Fava beans and a nice Chianti, taking a nibble is actively discouraged.


Article: Jimmy Choo Ltd

This article, which is specifically dedicated to the show brand and not the creator, is written in a neutral perspective and the information presented does not seem to be biased toward a particular position as it offers straight to the point information.

The article offers some references and cites most of them in an appropriate manner including links which work properly although the articles are old they support the narrative of the article. However, this article lacks information within most of its sections, as most of them are out of date, or insufficiently present the current progress and success of this shoe brand. For example, the locations section only mentions a few stores and when it comes to one of its main stores it only mentions one location in upstate New York (there is Jimmy Choo in Soho New York among many others around the world) and its awards section only has information from 2009.

Needless to say, the article needs up to date information, additional references, articles, links, and photos because compared to other articles dedicated to popular shoe brands e.g. Christian Louboutin, this one is not substantial nor up to date. This article is rated in its talk page as start class low-importance and its part of 5 WikiProjects (Brands, Companies, Fashion, London and Retailing) and its talk page do not look like it has much activity between its members.