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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 00:24, 9 March 2013 (UTC).
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Vedanta Philosophy: An address before the Graduate Philosophical Society[edit]
- ... that Vedanta Philosophy: An address before the Graduate Philosophical Society is a lecture given by Swami Vivekananda on 25 March 1896 at the Graduate Philosophical Society of Harvard University?
Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk), Abhidevananda (talk), 7&6=thirteen (talk) . Self nominated at 02:35, 6 March 2013 (UTC).
Date, hook ref, neutrality are fine. Fails on size: Prose size (text only): 1278 B (196 words) "readable prose size". Please expand till at least 250 words of prose (quotations don't count!). I'd also suggest making the hook more interesting, like mentioning he was offered a Harvard position after he delivered the lecture. Please ping me on talk for a re-review. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:28, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
- This has been done! Please suggest alt (I first tried what you have suggested but could not keep it in 200 characters! --Tito Dutta (contact) 11:46, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
GTG. For an alt, try piping Vedanta Philosophy: An address before the Graduate Philosophical Society into a lecture or such. Ping me if you'd like a review of the new hook. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:30, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
