Template:Did you know nominations/Vanessa Stokes, Softball in South Australia

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:53, 23 April 2012 (UTC)

Vanessa Stokes, Softball in South Australia[edit]

Vanessa Stokes

  • Reviewed: East to West (song)
  • Comment: Article moved (possibly merged) from my user space. Bidgee co-nommed because took pictures specifically for DYK nom.

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk), Bidgee (talk). Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 13:01, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

QPQ on Illusory correlation. And whoops! Brain fart in hook. Alt1 with correct year:
Template:Did you know nominations/Illusory correlation.

--LauraHale (talk) 07:46, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:41, 22 April 2012 (UTC)
Comment - I'm not sure that "trying" is the best choice, as it implies that she wants it but not that she may earn it. "Vying" is the word the source uses, also "competing" or "eligible" are viable replacements. Or replace "is trying to represent" with "may possibly represent", or "is in competition to represent". "Trying" says nothing of her chances. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 23:13, 22 April 2012 (UTC)
Fair point in comment above as she is named to a squad. They are just trimming players. --LauraHale (talk) 01:15, 23 April 2012 (UTC)
That's great. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 01:45, 23 April 2012 (UTC)