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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 06:39, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

Tuan Direktur[edit]

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... ~~that Hamka's novel Tuan Direktur (Mr Director) has been read as indicating that material wealth is not be as important friends and acquaintances?~~

ALT1:... ~~that Hamka's novel Tuan Direktur (Mr Director) has been considered as espousing that one who is humble and prays to God will find happiness?~~
Reviewed: Cecil Pryor

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 06:41, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

Article meets requirements and hooks appear to be accurate, but phrases like "has been read as indicating" and "has been considered as espousing" are rather clumsy and I really think you ought to be able to do better. Gatoclass (talk) 15:40, 15 December 2012 (UTC)

ALT2... that readings of Hamka's novel Tuan Direktur (Mr Director) indicate a moral that one who is humble and prays to God will find happiness?
ALT3... that Hamka's novel Tuan Direktur (Mr Director) has been read as anti-materialist and anti-superstition?

Something like this? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:28, 15 December 2012 (UTC)

Much better - thanks. Both alts AGF verified. Gatoclass (talk) 16:42, 15 December 2012 (UTC)