Template:Did you know nominations/St John the Evangelist's Church, Yealand Conyers
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:50, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
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St John the Evangelist's Church, Yealand Conyers[edit]
- ... that architectural historians have commented that the battlements of St John the Evangelist's Church, Yealand Conyers (pictured) are clumsy and the hood moulds are lumpy?
- Reviewed: Du meine Seele singe
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self-nominated at 13:44, 25 June 2015 (UTC).
The article is new (written on 25 June 2015) and long enough. It is interesting, neutral and cites sources with inline citations. No copyvio, close paraphrasing detected. The lead is my only concern, because it contains information (on the status of the church) which is not mentioned in the article. I suggest that the lead should be rewritten to be in line with WP:Lead.Borsoka (talk) 02:59, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you, Lead rewritten and Present day section added. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 08:38, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
