Template:Did you know nominations/Southward expansion of the Han Dynasty

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 22:10, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

Southward expansion of the Han Dynasty[edit]

Han Dynasty

Created by Taiping Tulip (talk). Self nominated at 03:27, 5 July 2013 (UTC).

  • The article is new and long enough. It's sufficiently cited. I see no copyright violations after spot checking. It looks good. The hook checks out, but it could be tweaked a bit (it seems like "it" refers to the expansion) before it's good to go. --Cold Season (talk) 08:28, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I have changed the "it" in the sentence to "the empire."--Taiping Tulip (talk) 19:52, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
  • That's acceptable. Everything is good to go. --Cold Season (talk) 20:17, 5 July 2013 (UTC)