Template:Did you know nominations/South Auckland

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 14:46, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

South Auckland

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... that the first supermarket in New Zealand opened in South Auckland? Source: https://www.aucklandcouncil.govt.nz/arts-culture-heritage/heritage-walks-places/Documents/papatoetoe-heritage-trail.pdf
- ALT1: ... that state housing and new motorways led to an explosion of growth in South Auckland in the 1970s? Source: https://knowledgeauckland.org.nz/media/1419/a-brief-history-of-aucklands-urban-form-2019-web.pdf
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ruth Northway
- Comment: Could the article be featured on the main page after the security issues with graphs has been resolved? There's an interactive map that will show up as an error until the issue's been fixed.

5x expanded by Prosperosity (talk). Self-nominated at 00:25, 10 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/South Auckland; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - n
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: @Prosperosity: So there's some issues. There's plenty of paragraphs that either don't have citations or don't end with citations. Many PDFs are cited in the article but barely any have page numbers. This is a problem because these pdfs have like 30+ pages so it makes it hard to verify, including the hooks. Also the article says first modern supermarket not the first specifically. Also needs a qpq. Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:17, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

Actually, i'm not even too sure if this is a five times expansion or if this falls too short of it. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:01, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke: Oh dear, you're right! The article on 1 May the article had 1,035 words of prose, and seven days later it had 4,338. My apologies, I'll withdraw the article as a DYK. --Prosperosity (talk) 02:19, 13 May 2023 (UTC)