Template:Did you know nominations/Sierra de Perijá National Park
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:56, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
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Sierra de Perijá National Park[edit]
Forested area in Sierra de Perijá
- ... that the Sierra de Perijá National Park (pictured) includes a portion of the Cordillera de Perija and the southwestern area of Lake Maracaibo, a large brackish bay connected to the Gulf of Venezuela?
Created by Nvvchar (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk), and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 14:36, 7 September 2015 (UTC).
, Hey folks. Date and length look good, and there don't seem to be paraphrasing problems with the online sources I looked at. One query though - the current hook makes it sound like the park includes a portion of Lake Maracaibo, but the descriptions I'm reading (like this one) make it sound like the park is in the mountainous area east of the lake - no mention of the Lake being within the park borders. The Interior (Talk) 01:20, 12 September 2015 (UTC)
- @The Interior: Thanks for the review. I agree with your view. I have modified the text in the article suitably and now suggesting this ALT1 hook ... that the Sierra de Perijá National Park (pictured) includes part of the Cordillera de Perija which rises on the southwestern area of Lake Maracaibo, a large bay connected to the Gulf of Venezuela?Nvvchar. 07:17, 22 September 2015 (UTC)
- I would like to suggest a more interesting hook. The article on the bird is currently at FAC. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:16, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that the Sierra de Perijá National Park (pictured) in Venezuela is home to the Perijá tapaculo, a bird first described in 2015?
- I agree with above hook suggestion.Nvvchar. 09:52, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- Unfortunately another reviewer is needed to approve the nomination. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:41, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth, can I review the new hook? As I didn't write it, I think it's okay, but I could be wrong ... The Interior (Talk) 15:37, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- That would be ideal, please do. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:03, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth, can I review the new hook? As I didn't write it, I think it's okay, but I could be wrong ... The Interior (Talk) 15:37, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- Unfortunately another reviewer is needed to approve the nomination. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:41, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
for ALT 1, which is more hooky that the original, IMO. Hook sourced to [1]. The Interior (Talk) 21:02, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
