Template:Did you know nominations/Schneller Orphanage
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:40, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Schneller Orphanage[edit]
- ... that the Schneller Orphanage in Jerusalem, which operated from 1860 to 1940, had its own printing press, bindery, flour mill, bakery, carpentry, pottery factory, and brick and tile plant?
- Reviewed: Holly Lincoln-Smith
- Comment: 5x expansion
Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 22:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Article seems fine, expansion and referencing ok, no close paraphrasing found (can't check the offline refs); hook is fine and correctly cited, although I have to assume good faith re the offline refs. Here is a suggestion for another hook:
- ALT1: ... that the Schneller Orphanage in Jerusalem, was confiscation by the British army in 1940? —Bruce1eetalk 13:54, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
