Template:Did you know nominations/Sara Agnes Rice Pryor

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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 23:02, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

Sara Agnes Rice Pryor[edit]

Created/expanded by Parkwells (talk). Self nom at 01:25, 25 April 2012 (UTC)

  • Article is new enough, long enough, etc. No glaring errors or maintenance tags. I'd suggest moving the links and e-book information for the bibliopgraphy down to the external link section, rather than keeping them in the article body like that. As for the hooks, they're all fine except for all sharing one serious error—"Civil War" is an incredibly ambiguous term. I read those words and instantly think of the 1922–1923 Irish Civil War, for instance. The phrase should both link to, and clearly state that it is, the American Civil War. It's fine in the article itself as that distinction is clearly made there. Aside from that we're good to go. GRAPPLE X 23:48, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Made change recommended.Parkwells (talk) 11:01, 16 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Adding a tick for clarity's sake. GRAPPLE X 22:55, 17 May 2012 (UTC)