Template:Did you know nominations/Roxana Cannon Arsht

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:57, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Roxana Cannon Arsht[edit]

Created by Z105space (talk). Self-nominated at 12:39, 5 July 2016 (UTC).

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Interesting bio, on good sources. With so many obitaries, it's difficult to paraphrase them all and still mean the same. The hook could be even simpler:
ALT1: ... that Roxana Cannon Arsht was the first woman appointed judge in Delaware? - Article: I am not sure what was "increased" means in "but was unable find a job, which had been increased after she married fellow lawyer ..." --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:52, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
ps: how do you feel about an infobox? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:53, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
@Gerda Arendt: I agree ALT1 is an improvement. Personally I 'm not sure whether an infobox will add much to the article. Z105space (talk) 08:04, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:10, 7 July 2016 (UTC)