Template:Did you know nominations/Pie house

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 11:38, 11 February 2022 (UTC)

Pie house

The narrow end of the pie house
The narrow end of the pie house

5x expanded by PCN02WPS (talk). Self-nominated at 06:58, 24 January 2022 (UTC).

  • Hi PCN02WPS, review follows: 5x expansion confirmed from 24 January; article is well written; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing of the sources; the sources used look to be reliable enough for the subject matter; you will need to add citations to the two footnotes; ALT0 is mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; While ALT1 is mentioned in the sources it is only mentioned in the lead of the article (where it is not cited); you mention ALT2 in the article but it is cited only to Lad Bible which doesn't mention the million view figure; a QPQ is awaited - Dumelow (talk) 09:08, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
    • @Dumelow: The first footnote has been cited and the I couldn't find any sources for the second (even though I could have sworn I saw some sources claiming it was four feet), so that one has been removed. ALT1 fact has been added to article body with a citation and ALT2's "million view" claim has also been sourced with the same reference used above in the hook. QPQ has been completed and linked above. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 21:33, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Hi PCN02WPS, looks good. One query, from the photograph the outside of the house looks bigger than three feet. Do we know if the 3 feet quoted is the internal size? Bit wary of saying "three feet wide at its narrowest" if it is wider than this externally - Dumelow (talk) 09:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
        • Dumelow, I hadn't thought about that. Obviously I think this nomination works really well as an image hook but if this issue prevents that I understand. I haven't found a source that specified whether the 3-foot measurement was external or internal, just that it narrows down to that width. This source, which I have just found, has a title and information in the article that suggest that the exterior tapers down to a width of "no wider than 6 feet", but again this is just a suggestion. If you think that this is reliable enough phrasing to determine that it is the external width, then I can update the article and the hook to reflect that. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:27, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi PCN02WPS, perhaps it's best that we just don't mention the size in the hook. I think it's fine in the article as the text reflects the sources. Realised I didn't mention the image in my first review, it is good and freely licensed. Approving ALT1 and ALT2 - Dumelow (talk) 07:58, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Dumelow, sounds good to me, I appreciate the review! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 17:37, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

ALT2 to T:DYK/P6