Template:Did you know nominations/Nyi Ageng Serang

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:45, 13 May 2012 (UTC)

Nyi Ageng Serang[edit]

  • ... that 73-year-old Nyi Ageng Serang led her troops in a war against Dutch colonists from a stretcher?
  • Reviewed: Not required per current DYK rules

Created/expanded by Redyka94 (talk). Nominated by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 11:12, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Date, length, hook all fine. (I prefer the first one.) No photo to check. Sources all offline or non-English, so AGF. One small thing: in paragraph 3 of Biography, the sentence: "Her forces were attached the lumbu to look like a taro orchard." It needs to be rephrased. Otherwise, it looks good. Anne (talk) 22:56, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review! Fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:03, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Excellent. You're all set! Anne (talk) 23:44, 12 May 2012 (UTC)