Template:Did you know nominations/New Tavern Fort

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:14, 3 July 2015 (UTC)

New Tavern Fort[edit]

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... that New Tavern Fort (gun pictured) in Gravesend, Kent, was built to protect London and the Thames from a possible French invasion during the American War of Independence?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Paximathia

5x expanded by Prioryman (talk). Self-nominated at 13:23, 30 June 2015 (UTC).

The article meets all other criteria, including expansion, time, hook length, etc., but the hook is not explicitly supported by the text. Neither is the sentence most closely supporting the hook cited.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:00, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: I've added an extra sentence [1] and tweaked the hook, which should resolve this. Prioryman (talk) 17:25, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

Good to go.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:21, 3 July 2015 (UTC)