Template:Did you know nominations/Montrose Center

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:55, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

Montrose Center[edit]

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~~... that the Montrose Center was the first behavioral health center to receive funding under the Ryan White CARE Act?~~ Source: "Montrose Management District – My Montrose: Dr. Ann Robison, The Montrose Center". montrosedistrict.org. Retrieved 2016-11-02.
- ALT1:... that the Montrose Center, formerly known as the Montrose Counseling Center (MCC), is an organization that provides mental and behaviorial health services for Houston's LGBT community, in Texas? Source: "New name, new look, same mission for Montrose Center". Chron.

5x expanded by Kmwebber (talk). Self-nominated at 17:45, 3 November 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - I like the first proposed hook, but I wish it were cited to a source not directly connected with the organization.
Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Article is new enough (nominated one day after five-fold expansion), long enough (~2500 characters), and well-sourced. I tidied up the references to make the citations more thorough and standardized the dates. The first proposed hook is much more interesting than ALT1, but the only source included for the claim it makes is an interview with the center's executive director, hardly an independent source. Can the expander/nominator (or someone else) provide a more independent verification of the claim about the Ryan White CARE Act? Bryanrutherford0 (talk) 17:47, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

There have been some substantial edits to the article since it was nominated, but it now seems to have reached a stable version(?). The new content also meets the DYK standard. The only remaining issue is the hook: without a more independent source to back up the claim, I can't approve the original proposal, and ALT1 is supported but pretty bland. Here is a spicier alternate with a clear citation:

ALT2: ... that the Westboro Baptist Church called Houston's Montrose Center "an oozing, purulent sore of sodomite contagion?" Source: OutSmart

Can someone else please review this hook or propose another?

-Bryanrutherford0 (talk) 17:47, 16 November 2016 (UTC)

I know that I probably don't get a say since I was the main editor for this article, but I really love the new hook you proposed, and I believe it is backed up with adequate sources. Kmwebber (talk) 20:21, 16 November 2016 (UTC)Kmwebber

ALT2 is verified and cited inline. Not sure if link should be to Sodom or Sodomy, or if it needs to be linked at all. Rest of review per Bryanrutherford0. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 02:07, 8 December 2016 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! It should go to "Sodomy"; I've fixed the dab-link in the hook above now.-Bryanrutherford0 (talk) 03:10, 8 December 2016 (UTC)

Does this mean that this will be queued for a DYK on the main page now? Or is there anything else that needs to be done? I have not done this process before, but I am excited. Kmwebber (talk) 22:49, 8 December 2016 (UTC)Kmwebber @Bryanrutherford0: @Yoninah: