Template:Did you know nominations/Mark Curry (rapper)

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:44, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Mark Curry (rapper)

Created by Launchballer (talk). Self-nominated at 12:39, 7 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Mark Curry (rapper); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Article is new and long enough, and the sourcing is just about okay, but the first hook looks too negative against a BLP, while the second isn't factually correct (Curry only sampled a Bowie recording; the hook suggests they collaborated in a studio together). Also, QPQ needs doing. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 13:56, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that Mark Curry's 2009 book contains a number of anecdotes about his time at Sean Combs' Bad Boy Records?
ALT3: ... that Mark Curry once released a record that credited David Bowie?--Launchballer 20:50, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
Ritchie333: Template:Did you know nominations/Broken Sword: The Shadow of the Templars (Game Boy Advance). I've taken out the word 'scurrilous' out and replaced 'with' with 'that credited'.--Launchballer 21:19, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
I was thinking more like ALT4: ... that Mark Curry sampled David Bowie? That would work. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 14:21, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
ALT5: ... that the Mark Curry song "American Dream" sampled the David Bowie song "This Is Not America"?--Launchballer 15:39, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
Okay, ALT5 works for me. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 15:50, 15 June 2023 (UTC)