Template:Did you know nominations/Making a New World
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:40, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
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Making a New World
- ... that the Field Music album Making a New World includes a song about the development of sanitary napkins from material used for dressing war wounds?
- ALT1:... that Making a New World, a concept album by Field Music about the after-effects of World War I, originated from a commission by the Imperial War Museum?
5x expanded by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self-nominated at 03:30, 1 April 2020 (UTC).
- Hey Hunter Kahn, this is an impressive expansion, and I think it can easily pass a GA review. My review follows below: epicgenius (talk) 02:16, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- There are a lot of quotes that bring up false positives on copyvios. But there are also some true matches which aren't in quotes:
first true concept album. Its songs grew from a project Field Music undertook for the Imperial War Museum
utilised transducers to capture the vibrations, then displayed on a graph showing the distances between peaks on different lines to pinpoint the location of enemy armament
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| QPQ: Done. |
Overall: 
epicgenius (talk) 02:16, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks epicgenius. I've made some minor changes to try to alleviate the copyvio issues. The two flagged passages were actually in the pre-expansion version, which may still have been written by me in the past, but is probably why I didn't catch it during the expansion. In any event, let me know if you think it's sufficient now. (Also, I actually have nominated it for GA, along with one other Field Music album, so if you or anyone else reading this is interested in reviewing it, by all means! LOL) Thanks! — Hunter Kahn 02:47, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Hunter Kahn: No problem. I didn't see the GA template, but that's even better. I or someone else might review it down the road.
- Sorry to bother you again, but there are actually a few more examples (which I didn't notice before). I think these should be the last issues. epicgenius (talk) 02:52, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
- No bother at all epicgenius. I made a couple other changes that I think address the ones that aren't either quote fragments or album/song titles, but if I missed any feel free to ping me again... — Hunter Kahn 03:00, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
This should be good to go, then. Thanks for responding so quickly. epicgenius (talk) 03:08, 3 April 2020 (UTC)