Template:Did you know nominations/List of Prime Ministers of India

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:02, 22 December 2012 (UTC)

List of Prime Ministers of India[edit]

Indira Gandhi

Created/expanded by TheSpecialUser (talk). Self nom at 07:19, 17 November 2012 (UTC)

  • My reveiw. Article: 1.It was a much more than 5-fold expansion in the lede section. 2. There were about 2000 characters in the lede on the nomination date. It seems neutral and well cited, though I didn't check all the soruces for close paraphrasing. Hook: 1. Is 137 characters. 2. The hook is very interesting and well sourced. Other: The image in fine. My only concerns: Why is there no Quid pro quo (a review of another article)? Also some of the grammar seems clunky to me, but that could be a Indian English thing. --Kevlar (talkcontribs) 22:08, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Summary of above: QPQ required, copyedit for grammar needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:24, 11 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Issues unaddressed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:26, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

Article reads OK, fact checks out, QPQ now done. --Errant (chat!) 20:21, 21 December 2012 (UTC)