Template:Did you know nominations/Kiss You (One Direction song)

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The result was: promoted by caknuck ° needs to be running more often 00:08, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Kiss You (One Direction song)[edit]

  • ... that the concept behind the music video for One Direction's "Kiss You" is "bigger than anything" One Direction have done before?

Created/expanded by AdabowtheSecond (talk). Self nom at 22:04, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

Hook needs to be reworked badly. It lacks clarity and interest.. Not sure what to suggest. Can you come up with any Alts? ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 17:16, 27 December 2012 (UTC)

You can shut this down. Too tired, busy to care about this anymore. Thanks for your comments, though. Regards —AdabowtheSecond 13:59, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that according to One Direction member Liam Payne, "Kiss You" set the lyrical tone for their second studio album?
How about:
ALT3: ... that One Direction band member Louis Tomlinson thinks that their video for their new song "Kiss You" is "pure stupidity"?
Bit catchier? ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 15:33, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
I concur. —AdabowtheSecond 15:37, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
Great! Good to go for ALT3. All requirements met. I can't believe that I've contributed to a One Direction article... I'll have a dozen WTF e-mails from my male and female students by morning. ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 15:50, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
Lol, thanks for your help —AdabowtheSecond 16:12, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
Just have to wait for someone else to approve the ALT3... ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 01:00, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
  • ALT3 approved: cited source confirms the facts; striking earlier hooks which have not been confirmed. I rather suspect Tomlinson's going to regret having said that... The only reason I haven't given the tick is that I'm not sure whether danjel gave a full review (length, sourcing, close paraphrasing, etc.) or just an "all requirements met" review of the ALT3, and I'd rather be safe than sorry. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:49, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, that was in regards to the check over of the article. It's good to go. ˜danjel [ talk | contribs ] 03:31, 29 December 2012 (UTC)