Template:Did you know nominations/Kino Babylon

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:08, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

Kino Babylon[edit]

Created by Sinuhe20 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:46, 9 July 2016 (UTC).

  • New, long enough, and has some inline citations, but the entire Planning and architecture section has just one inline citation. The hook is fine but not supported with an inline citation in the article. Excused from QPQ. No image. The article itself has many grammatical issues, and these ought to be addressed too. FunkyCanute (talk) 14:06, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
Hello, for the hook I've found now a citation and added it in the article.--Sinuhe20 (talk) 14:53, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
I'll review again once the other fixes that I mentioned are done. FunkyCanute (talk) 21:15, 9 July 2016 (UTC)
The grammatical issues seem now to be fixed by BlackcurrantTea.--Sinuhe20 (talk) 11:34, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
  • The hook is now cited inline, and I cleaned up a few more unclear bits in the text. It should be ready to go now. -Bryanrutherford0 (talk) 18:23, 25 July 2016 (UTC)