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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:56, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

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Joy Ufema[edit]

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  • ... that the 1981 television film A Matter of Life and Death is based on the story of nurse Joy Ufema?

Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 13:51, 3 September 2016 (UTC).

 • No issues found with article, ready for human review.

    • ✓ This article is new and was created on 07:34, 03 September 2016 (UTC)
    • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 3433 characters
    • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
    • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
    • ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (12.3% confidence; confirm)
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  • New enough; long enough; neutral; sourced; appears free of copyvio; hook format okay; hook source checks out; QPQ done; no image. Rosekelleher (talk) 22:28, 5 September 2016 (UTC)
  • These hooks are not hooky at all. It would be far more interesting to say something about what she did, like:
  • ALT2: ... that Joy Ufema's fellow nurses felt she had been given too much autonomy when she started granting last wishes to dying patients? Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Thank you. New reviewer needed for ALT2. I'm just wondering if the word should be "license" or "leeway" rather than "freedom" (the author is trying to paraphrase "latitude"). Yoninah (talk) 09:20, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Yes, that's very good. I tweaked ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 12:06, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
  • ALT2 is much more "hooky", at 129 characters is well within length requirement, and is an acceptable paraphrase of the sentence found in the cited source, "Nurses complained that she was allowed too much latitude" in granting the wishes of dying patients. I agree with the assessment of Rosekelleher that the article meets other DYK requirements, too. GTG. Grand'mere Eugene (talk) 18:54, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Comment More recent references show Ufema has apparently begun using her maiden name again, as in "Joy (Ufema) Counsel". That's how she is identified in the external link to the video, and in this piece. Should the article be updated and moved to reflect the name she is now using? Grand'mere Eugene (talk) 23:13, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
  • @Grand'mere Eugene: the page name should be the WP:COMMONNAME which most articles call her. Since she rose to fame and wrote books as Joy Ufema, I think we should stick with this name and just mention in the article that she divorced in whatever year and went back to using her maiden name. Yoninah (talk) 21:36, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
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