Template:Did you know nominations/Jennifer Screen

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:45, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Jennifer Screen

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• ... that Jennifer Screen's first major call up to the Australian Opals was for the 2006 World Championships in Brazil where her team took home a gold medal?

• Reviewed: Frank Morgan (Home and Away)

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk), Tim Collins (talk). Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 06:49, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

• From DYKCheck: Article has not been created or expanded 5x within the past 10 days; assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 9 edits ago on March 15, 2011. Nikthestoned 16:15, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

Er? Math please? Start as completely unsourced BLP. Prose size (text only): 251 B (43 words) "readable prose size" on 1 June 2008. Current size: Prose size (text only): 3406 characters (595 words) "readable prose size". DYK program tells me it was expanded. What numbers do you have that say no to five fold expansion or two fold unsourced BLP expansions? --LauraHale (talk) 20:51, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

DYKcheck must have been on holiday; it shows a proper expansion for me. Expansion and date are good, and spotchecks with Duplication Detector indicate CP/CV isn't a concern. The hook is though; the phrasing could be a bit more precise with regards to the reference. How is this? - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 21:41, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Jennifer Screen's (pictured) first international tournament with the Australian Opals was the 2006 World Championships in Brazil, where her team took home a gold medal?

I was having issues with DYK check yesterday myself and had to do manual checks. In any case, happy with ALT1. Couldn't think of anything more interesting about her from the article TBH. :( --LauraHale (talk) 21:52, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, yesterday there was an api issue that borked a lot of things. And sometimes you can only find something moderatly interesting for a hook...but it's still something You Didn't Know. :) Good to go. - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 21:57, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

Apologies, does seem to be just fine now - not sure what DYKcheck was looking at... Nikthestoned 09:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC)