Template:Did you know nominations/Inés Coronel Barreras

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:56, 31 May 2014 (UTC)

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Inés Coronel Barreras[edit]

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Created by ComputerJA (talk). Self nominated at 23:29, 27 May 2014 (UTC).

  • New and long enough, interesting subject and hook, which is well references. Good to go. Javier Espinoza (talk) 21:44, 29 May 2014 (UTC)
  • Saying that someone is related to someone big doesn't make me want to read about the first person. Why not say something about the subject himself? Here are some ideas:
  • ALT1: ... that while Mexican drug lord Inés Coronel Barreras was officially listed as a cattle rancher in Durango, the neighbors claimed he was growing marijuana and opium poppy?
  • ALT2: ... that in May 2014 rumors circulated that imprisoned Mexican drug lord Inés Coronel Barreras had escaped? Yoninah (talk) 01:02, 30 May 2014 (UTC)
  • You're right ... I might be one of the few who would actually be curious :P Anyways, I think I'll take ALT2 because it's more recent. Thanks for the review, Javier Espinoza and Yoninah. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 01:24, 30 May 2014 (UTC)
  • As I'm not allowed to approve my own hook, could another reviewer check ALT2 please? Yoninah (talk) 01:38, 30 May 2014 (UTC)
  • Don't like ALT2 because he apparently wasn't even in that prison and apparently hadn't escaped. The concept is interesting, but may want to tweak to add something about how he wasn't even there or otherwise fix it. I personally like ALT1 better, but ComputerJA needs to say if any objections. Montanabw(talk) 23:38, 31 May 2014 (UTC)
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