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... that the first recorded debt cancellation took place 4,400 years ago in Sumer and that personal debt was cancelled regularly in the Ancient Middle East? Source: Hudson, Michael (2018). ... And Forgive Them Their Debts. ISLET-Verlag. pp. 29–30. ISBN9783981826029.
Other problems: - Generally, the hook fact (between "... that" and the question mark) should be written so the fact could stand alone as a complete sentence if you removed "... that" and the question mark. In particular, "the first recorded debt cancellation took place 4,400 years ago in Sumer and that personal debt was cancelled regularly in the Ancient Middle East" is not a complete sentence. It seems like you're trying to combine two facts in the same hook.
ALT1: ... that the first recorded debt cancellation took place 4,400 years ago in Sumer?
Alternatively, I'd remove "that" from the middle of the sentence, as in
ALT3: ... that the first recorded debt cancellation took place 4,400 years ago in Sumer, and personal debt was cancelled regularly in the Ancient Middle East?
However, I find ALT3 to be less interesting because it's overly lengthy, so I suggest ALT1 and ALT2 instead.
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Overall: @Alaexis: Nice work. I had a query about the wording of the hook itself, but everything else looks good. Epicgenius (talk) 17:59, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing the nomination! Let's use ALT2 then, I like it more. Alaexis¿question? 19:58, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
Sounds good. Since I can't approve a hook that I proposed myself, I'll let someone else review the hook. Epicgenius (talk) 22:41, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
@Epicgenius: Ancient Near East or Ancient Middle East? There seems to be a disagreement between the hook and article... theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 05:29, 20 July 2023 (UTC)