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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 18:58, 8 July 2015 (UTC)

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Hilda C. Heine[edit]

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Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 03:32, 5 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Age and size of the article are okay. QPQ done. Good to go! -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 17:29, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
  • The hook is rather dry (X is Y). How about:
  • ALT1: ... that Hilda C. Heine is the first Marshallese woman to earn a doctorate degree?
  • That will get a lot of clicks for the term "Marshallese" alone. Yoninah (talk) 21:00, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: Thanks for the review. Cool ALT. Let's go with it! --Rosiestep (talk) 01:09, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Could another reviewer sign off on ALT1? Yoninah (talk) 09:04, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
  • GTG. Created on June 4, nominated on June 5. 1713 chars meet guideline. Appears neutral. ALT1 hook well under the limit and interesting. Verified by source cited. Does not appear to be close paraphrasing. There are in-line sources throughout except for the last statement which indicates her published works is not cited, a quick google search did confirm that they are published works in her name. [1] [2] and [3] SusunW (talk) 22:54, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
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