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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 22:37, 6 February 2013 (UTC)

HTMS Sri Ayudhya[edit]

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HTMS Thonburi, sister ship of the HTMS Sri Ayudhya

5x expanded by Paul 012 (talk). Self nom at 19:54, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

  • Date, size are fine. However the article uses non-English refs, and does not use end-of-sentence cites, including for the sentences related to the hook. As I cannot verify that the hook is in the ref claimed, and I am not trusting end-of-para refs, I cannot pass it unless end-of-sentence cites are added. Another reviewer may pass it if they wish or if they can verify the hook. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 20:27, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Ref #5,[1] which is in English and accessible via Google Books, covers basically everything in the hook. I couldn't find a single sentence with which to associate the hook since it's practically a summary of the whole paragraph. I could move the ref tag around, if you have specific suggestions. --Paul_012 (talk) 20:35, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Okay. Usually I don't see the point in repeating the same in-line refs for every sentence, but since two are now used in the paragraph clarification seems reasonable. --Paul_012 (talk) 22:20, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
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