Template:Did you know nominations/Chris Bertish

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:46, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Chris Bertish

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• ... that Chris Bertish, a South African born surfer, is the first person to complete a stand-up paddle board crossing of the Atlantic Ocean, and is listed in the Guiness Book of World Records? Surfer becomes First to Cross the Atlantic on a Paddleboard National Geographic; Big-Wave Surfer Chris Bertish on his Sup-Transatlantic Crossing: An interview with the man who paddled across an ocean to raise money for charity Surfer Magazine
  • ALT1:... that Chris Bertish is the first person to complete a solo unsupported stand-up paddle board crossing of the Atlantic Ocean, a journey of 7,400 km (4,600 mi) and 93 days? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
  • ALT2:... that Chris Bertish is the first person to complete a solo, unsupported stand-up paddle board (SUP) crossing of the Atlantic Ocean. "South Africa: Chris Bertis completes first ever solo unsupported transatlantic SUP crossing". Sport24. March 10, 2017. Retrieved March 19, 2017. Bertish personally committed to funding one operation for a child in Africa through Operation Smile for every world record he achieved on this epic Transatlantic journey. And he achieved many of them including a new world record for a 24-hour solo unsupported and unassisted open ocean distance SUP.

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Created by Conlinp (talk) and 7&6=thirteen (talk). Nominated by 7&6=thirteen (☎) March 2017 (UTC) at 10:31 (UTC).

• ALT4... that Chris Bertish is the first person to complete a stand-up paddle board crossing of the Atlantic Ocean, a 7,400 km (4,600 mi), 93 day journey that put him into the Guiness Book of World Records?

• New and long enough, all ¶ with citations, copyvio check reveals no problems. Hooks are all within size and interesting, factual, neutral, etc. QPC verified. Hooks verified with appropriate citations. I tweaked the wording in the hooks a little and approve all three. I like ALT2 the least. I also added ALT4, which is a combination of the hook and ALT1. We can let the promoter make a final choice; all are OK. - previously unsigned by User:MB
• ALT4 is Good To Go.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:53, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

Concur with ALT4. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 12:03, 20 March 2017 (UTC)